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theboy25 · 13-05-2010 08:17:54

Bonjour à tous ! je suis en seconde, et j'ai un devoir d'anglais à rendre pour lundi. J'ai essayer de le faire, mais je suis vraiment mauvais en anglais, donc j'aimerai que vous me corrigiez mes fautes si possible ^^.

Voici le sujet : What sort of TV viewer are you ? Would you personally live without TV ? Give your reasons and illustrate with examples.

Et voici ma rédaction :

The tv has an important place in our society. Everybody possesses television nowadays, and we watch all the television regularly. We can say that she is present in our everyday life. (30 mots).

Personally, I don't watch a lot the tv. I watch it generally by dining, simply for to look at the information. Sometimes, in the evening, I watch a good movie in my sofa for to relax me, but that doesn't arrive everything the days. On the other hand, I always watch the important sports events, as the Olympics, or then the world cups of all sports. I don't watch lot the tv during the holidays, I prefer by far to go out with my friends! Besides, I don't have of tv in my room, and that do not really miss me. So as, I would say that I little watch TV, because I don't watch her all the days. (115 mots)

I think that the tv is really indispensable to the society nowadays. The tv is present in the everyday life of all the society, and that would be a big shock for a lot of people to part with a television set at home. Many things are communicated by the tv : the publicity, the movies, the documentaries, and especially the information. The information at tv allows us to see and to listen all that to happen in the country and even in the world. It's for me something indispensable in the life, we need to know the world in which we live. At tv, there are also a lot of movies and documentaries. We can dispense us of this type of program, they are made to relax, they are not indispensable.

At TV, there are dispensable programs and other indispensable. The programs which inform are compulsory for the life in the society. On the other hand, the programs such as the movies are just made to relax, we could do without them.

Ca doit être plein de fautes ^^". ça serait sympa de vite m'aider parce que je dois le rendre pour lundi ! Merci d'avance !

Josy · 13-05-2010 12:37:28

The tv has got an important place in our society. Everybody own a television nowadays, and we watch all the television regularly. We can say that it is present in our everyday life.

Personally, I don't often watch the tv. I watch it generally by dining, just to look at the tv informations. Sometimes, in the evening, I watch a good movie in my sofa to relax me, but everyday. On the other hand, I always watch the important sports events, as the Olympic games, or then the world cups of all sports. I don't often watch the tv during holidays, I prefer by far to go out with my friends! Besides, I don't have any tv in my room, and that do not really miss me. So, I would say that I don't really watch TV, because I don't really mind that

I think that the tv is really important to the society nowadays. The tv is present in the everyday life of all the society, and that would be a big shock for a lot of people to part with a television set at home. Many things are communicated by the tv : the publicities, the movies, the documentaries, and especially the informations. The informations at tv allows us to see and to listen all that to happen in the country and even in the world. It's for me something very important in the life, we need to know the world in which we live. At tv, there are also a lot of movies and documentaries. We can dispense us of this type of programs, they are made to relax, they are not essentials.

At TV, there are dispensable programs and other indispensable. The programs which inform us are compulsory for the life in the society. On the other hand, the programs such as the movies are just made to relax, we could do without them.

J'ai changé quelques petits trucs, changé quelques fautes.
J'ai sûrement zappé des choses, mais bon je suis qu'en 3ème mais dans une classe spécialisée en anglais, donc j'ai fais ce que j'ai pû.
Si les autres membres revoient des fautes, ils pourront t'aider aussi.

Dernière modification par Josy (13-05-2010 12:37:45)

frog · 13-05-2010 13:03:19

Television, as as source of information and entertainment, acquired an important place in our modern society. Most of us own at least one television nowadays, and almost all turn on the set regularly. We can say that it is part of our everyday life.

Personally, I wouldn''t say that I watch TV often, though I like to get to see the news every day while I’m dining. Sometimes, in the evening, I watch a good movie in my sofa to relax me, but everyday — c’est tous les jours ou pas du coup ?. On the other hand, I always watch the important sports events, as the Olympic games and the world cups of all sports. I don't watch TV often during holidays, I prefer by far to hang out with my friends! Besides, I don't have a TV in my room and that doesn’t bother me at all. So, I would say that I don't really watch TV, because I don't really mind that --- j'aurais tendance à enlever cette phrase, vu qu'elle contredit tout ton paragraphe.

I think that TV is really important to society nowadays. Television is present in our everyday life and it would be a big shock for a lot of people to part with a television set at home. Many things are broadcasted by TV channels : ads, movies, documentaries, and especially the news. The latter allows us to see and hear about all that happens in the country and around the world. For me, it is something very important to know the latest news about the world we live in. Contrarily to informative contents, I think that entertainment, such as movies and even documentaries, are not essential and that therefore, we could do without this kind of programs.

In other words, what TV offers can be divided in to categories : useful and useless content. Useful, the contents that allow me to be an informed citizen in our society. Useless, the contents that are only meant to distract people from reality.

Pense à regarder dans le dico les mots ou expressions que tu ne comprends pas (pour les expressions, google te donne des sites bien avec des traductions faciles à comprendre)... Et note les dans ton cahier, sinon, tu risques de te faire griller par ton/ta prof si après avoir rendu ton devoir, tu ne te souviens plus du touuuuut du vocabulaire que tu auras employé.

Dernière modification par frog (13-05-2010 13:30:53)

theboy25 · 13-05-2010 19:35:35

I watch a good movie in my sofa to relax me, but everyday — c’est tous les jours ou pas du coup ? : Je veux dire que çà n'arrive pas tout les jours.

theboy25 · 13-05-2010 19:36:25

Merci beaucoup à vous 2, c'est super sympa, ca me parait beaucoup mieux .

theboy25 · 13-05-2010 19:39:52

Television, as as source of information and entertainment, :: tes deux "as, as", ca me parait bizarre ^^ !

lam · 14-05-2010 10:49:16

moi aussi ça me parait bizarre

Josy · 14-05-2010 19:28:07

theboy25 a écrit:
I watch a good movie in my sofa to relax me, but everyday — c’est tous les jours ou pas du coup ? : Je veux dire que çà n'arrive pas tout les jours.

Not* everyday désolée j'avais oublié un mot Les 2 as de Frog sont pas faits exprès.
Et de rien!

Dernière modification par Josy (14-05-2010 19:28:37)

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